Report to the Commissioner No. 48

Finished Chapters 6 and 7; Word  Count 9,507

Put me in a scene. Something happens to move the story forward. New information, a character realizes something, a character makes a bold choice. Let the scene unfold as if it’s happening before the reader’s eyes (straight out of Aristotle).

Author: janelake

Published author of five novels of romantic suspense. There's always sex in my stories, and there's always a dead body somewhere along the line. View all posts by janelake