Got Chapter 71 and 72. Word Count: 53,712
Here’s a clue. Yes, the SecNav and the Damocles file on the table happened, but what mattered was what it did to Anna Jane to see the file on the table. Her face goes white. She looks like she’s seen a ghost. Murder and walking spirits.
It’s not what happens. It’s how it affects the characters, helps them evolve.
Another clue: enter through the amygdala is always good. Memory and emotion.
Start with an image. Write within the image.
Got a new ending that made me cry.
Eclectic Magpie 