Report to the Commissioner No. 41

Chapters 66, 67, and 68 done. Word count: 49,446

Mapped out Chapter 68 by pulling notes from my various subject files and spent a week trying to make it work, finally realized it was an infodump that existed solely so I could fill in character background notes, so I dismantled it and absorbed the material back into my subject files.

Got a new Chapter 68 by relying on the Sorkin formula: Intention + Obstacle = Conflict.

Then I made the same mistake for Chapter 69, which is where I am now. I’ve realized it mostly exists so I can fill in some balonium accompanied by some handwavium, so I’m stuck again. Losing confidence in my ability to write. Wondering how I justify my continued existence as a human being. Questioning how I will emerge from this dark night of the soul. Asking myself why, why, why don’t I clean the bathroom.

A writer’s life.

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Author: janelake

Published author of five novels of romantic suspense. There's always sex in my stories, and there's always a dead body somewhere along the line.

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