Report to the Commissioner No. 29

Finished eight more chapters of the Fourth Draft.

Thirteen chapters into the Fourth Draft. Word Count: 11,298.

Using Time like Occam’s Razor to reorganize the plot has been a revelation. Changes the sequence and pacing. Remains to be seen how it will work overall, but so far it’s creating a clear sequence.

Daniel Mason said of his recent novel: “It had become this huge appendage that I was constantly trying to beat into shape.” I could relate.

Author: janelake

Published author of five novels of romantic suspense. There's always sex in my stories, and there's always a dead body somewhere along the line. View all posts by janelake