Report to the Commissioner No. 10

Accomplished:

–Wrote Chapters 32 and 33; word count — 31,097

Objectives:

–Write Chapters 34 and 35

–Review subject matter files

Comment:

Getting great value out of not explaining. The narrative is much better and stronger when you delete anything that seems like an explanation. Essence of show not tell.

I hope certain comic-book aspects come through as homage.