Critique Notes

The obstacle is the path.

A rule in spiritual growth, and a rule in plotting. The way forward is to put obstacles in the paths of your characters. Infallible and reliable. Ask yourself the magic question: How can I make things worse?

I was stuck most of the week on Chapter Eight. Finally realized it was in the wrong place. I switched it with the chapter formerly known as Chapter Nine, and the whole thing worked much better.

Scared, scared, scared. Just like Anna Jane.

 

 

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Author: janelake

Published author of five novels of romantic suspense. There's always sex in my stories, and there's always a dead body somewhere along the line.

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