Report to the Commissioner No. 3

Created an outline of a plot structure by combining Viki King’s Inner Movie Method of 9 key plot points with the five-act structure I learned from Shonda Rhimes.

Skimmed through my folder of writing notes on how to do it.

Made key bad-guy decisions: (1) eliminated a favorite bad-guy character, Sergeant Major Sam Fox; (2) simplified the motivations of the remaining bad guys — they just want one thing instead of being at cross-purposes; (3) gave the final twist to the Uzbeks.

Re-thought Anna Jane’s motivations and completely changed her journey.

Fit the pieces of the plot into my new structure and created a beat sheet with 70 beats that should see me through.

Objective:

Read through and tweak the beat sheet into fighting shape.

Write Chapter One.

 

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Author: janelake

Published author of five novels of romantic suspense. There's always sex in my stories, and there's always a dead body somewhere along the line.

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